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I've been working, in a fashion most lackadaisical, on the background story of how these two originally met.
Their 'Origin Story'.
But it's a lot to write. This alone was 9 pages in my Doc folder, so I thought it might be best to break it into sections.
Loarnik note: Mari, if you didn't realize, just means 'mother'. 'Maw-rye'
Their 'Origin Story'.
But it's a lot to write. This alone was 9 pages in my Doc folder, so I thought it might be best to break it into sections.
Loarnik note: Mari, if you didn't realize, just means 'mother'. 'Maw-rye'
:>-NOTE-<: The lorefails. There WILL be lorefails in this series. Please remember that this is a fanfiction and touches on many subjects either very loosely mentioned or not mentioned at all in the game. Assumptions will be made.
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Hello, 
Percy from Twitter here (sorry for being late, I picked a bad time to fall ill).
I smiled on the inside when Palkeera instantly calmed Zara with her words; telling the child her mum's dead, it was nice to see that with Zara, after the trauma of watching her mum get eaten alive, and spending days of refusing food and water. I believe TV Tropes would've called that a Crowning Moment of Heartwarming.
I also liked Azzanadra's part, I think you got his character down, he's a "by the rules" kind of guy, and I can picture him saying something like that in-game, maybe in a flashback cutscene. I really liked how unemotional and unbothered he was by Zara's plight, that's very much like him, he doesn't know her very well; he's just met her of course he'd be on the apathetic side.
Enaqua was right, Arocath is savage! This line--" 'Or is this some vulgar attempt to replace your last failed child?' " made me go "oh...burn...better get that ice, Palkeera" he may not be the nicest guy in the room, but his lines were gold, and that mitigated his personality a bit.
Percy from Twitter here (sorry for being late, I picked a bad time to fall ill).
I smiled on the inside when Palkeera instantly calmed Zara with her words; telling the child her mum's dead, it was nice to see that with Zara, after the trauma of watching her mum get eaten alive, and spending days of refusing food and water. I believe TV Tropes would've called that a Crowning Moment of Heartwarming.
I also liked Azzanadra's part, I think you got his character down, he's a "by the rules" kind of guy, and I can picture him saying something like that in-game, maybe in a flashback cutscene. I really liked how unemotional and unbothered he was by Zara's plight, that's very much like him, he doesn't know her very well; he's just met her of course he'd be on the apathetic side.
Enaqua was right, Arocath is savage! This line--" 'Or is this some vulgar attempt to replace your last failed child?' " made me go "oh...burn...better get that ice, Palkeera" he may not be the nicest guy in the room, but his lines were gold, and that mitigated his personality a bit.